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Dark Poetry #5
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SlowlyFallAway
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since 2008-08-29
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0 posted 2009-01-03 01:12 AM

I share with you, my suicide
False assumptions, lost in lies
I disconnect myself from them
So I cannot be hurt again

January 3rd 2009
Emily Shives
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young_blood
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1 posted 2009-01-08 08:29 AM

I like the brevity of this. It pushes a sense of urgency on the reader. Hints at so much behind the words.
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