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Dark Poetry #5

live or die

Britt_Brat
Junior Member

since 2008-03-05

Posts 37
Knoxville, TN

0 posted 2009-03-10 11:12 AM

you hear the drums beat. you see a woman crying. you know you should look away but you can't. a family is dieing. a child barely breathing. can't bear it any more, you look away. then you see a flash. it hits you out of no where. you open your eyes and everything is white, binding white. then it stars to fade into a dull sun light. you see a pound, you go to it. you see your reflection and you lose your breath. you stumble back you look to the sky and see the place you just left. and you see yourself again lying in that bed. the child that is dying. you have a choice to live or die. so which will you choose?

Lost & wondering till I'm found

prettypinkrebel
Member

since 2007-11-07

Posts 104

1 posted 2009-03-10 03:31 PM

AHHH I lOVE IT!! Gret write

Life is normally a broken road....so look ahead for the cracks!

pandabear
Junior Member

since 2009-03-08

Posts 36

2 posted 2009-03-10 08:14 PM

really good

angelfacegurl
Member

since 2008-04-17

Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI

3 posted 2009-03-17 01:06 PM

I love it
and it has a amazing meaning.
great job!

Brittany

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