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zaxby Junior Member
since 2009-03-05
Posts 48California |
Glowing fields cracked by a relentless sun without mercy mirror infinity at earth’s curve. Melding evasive wind spins mini cyclones in harsh triumph. Stumps of once glorious trees spread abstract fingers to a sky holding the waste of man. Across a vast beyond whispering dried grass whistles alien tunes at walkers from the void. Tall and somber bowed, by war’s weight. they search for pure water in a land ravished with faulty dreams. Still remembering ultimate loss, those shrieks of pain. Bad death from faces once loved. Etched into tenacious memory wound’s so deep with no point or reason found. Cruel heat of day dives into bitter night, obsidian with glittering lost eyes. Hands are held, fingers lock in this wasted world. even to the end |
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pandabear Junior Member
since 2009-03-08
Posts 36 |
good |
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Eirian Member
since 2009-04-13
Posts 70 |
that was great, i really enjoyed reading that. |
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JenniferMaxwell
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
Lovely stark and brooding images. These ones really jumped out at me: "Stumps of once glorious trees spread abstract fingers to a sky holding the waste of man. Across a vast beyond whispering dried grass whistles alien tunes at walkers from the void." Good work! |
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