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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
I hate the words you speak to me I hate the way you make me scream I hate how you can get your way With every little word you say I hate the smile on your face I hate the way you make me stay I hate your mouth all over me I hate that you won't let me be I hate it when you come inside Seducing me with all your lies I hate how you don't understand Just how much I hate those hands I hate the broken bedroom door That I walked in with nothing more Than all the innocence I had I hate myself for going back I hate that you won't ever know The hatred that I'll never show I hate the world for what it's done I hate this monster you've become Emily Shives |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
A great poem Emily. But your hidden monster, cruel sedition and angry regret can't help but plant the seed of fear in my mind. Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told. |
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angelfacegurl Member
since 2008-04-17
Posts 67Swartz Creek, MI |
wow i really really love this poem!! Brittany |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
This is a simple and straight forward poem. The feeling of despair, regret and a sense of loss of innocence can be felt throughout this entire piece. It was a nice read, Slowly. - If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell - |
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