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Goodbye |
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Vagabondinmyownmind Junior Member Posts 22 |
Goodbye to you & me Goodbye to memories Days past feeling free Two Souls Burned like Fire Quickly spread into desire It never ended in Peace Gluttony at the feast Trust in each other decreased Members destroyed by deceit Depression we did meet We lived on the same street Love in the air we didn't even care into each other eyes, stare Smashed apart by words visions became blurred It was my fault, sounds absurd I was your curse Hurt feelings were dispersed the street corner was no farce We made the future list Declared happiness in the mist sunsets of beauty were kissed Fantasy raged in the night Candles upon your skin Living in the darkest sin Should I stay or go No one will ever really know you still linger in my brain so You no longer exist in person I search in the night for your face As i emotionally move to a new place All between us were public Embraced into each other The world rotated around us End of the world didn't matter |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
"As I emotionally move to a new place" Sometimes a 'new place' is the only place that'll have us. ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
Well written, with an underlying pathos. Write on! |
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