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A Tear Of Blood
New Member

since 2008-08-27

Posts 3
USA/Cali/LA

0 posted 2008-08-27 09:21 PM

With no thoughts of who you were
Our third day I made you promise
To never leave
Always say whats on your mind
An to always keep me safe

You did your job
But into our relaionship I grow to love you deeply

Once I knew who you truly were
I was oh so late
To Think
To realize
Who I was with

I was young
An oh so dumb
I went at it oh so fast

Now here I am writing this dearly poem
Tears of blood roundin' down my face

I told you everything
I never lied
I spoke of marry
Of children

I've cried a lake
I've cried a river
I've cried tha damn ocean
for cryin' out loud
I gave you my EVERYTHING
At such a young age

I told my mother of all your life
'bout what you did!
'bout who you were!
An 'bout your mistakes!

No matter what I said to her she always liked you!
Tha first an tha only one

I wish you knew how I feel!
All my pain!!

But until this day on I will always remember our love for each other it was
A love so incomprehensible
So Vivid
An oh so Unique
So crazy God's Reign can't cantrol
A passion so deep
A need oh so necessary
An a want so strong

But till this day
I know you will always love me
Cause you've called me everyday
Always been so sweet
An still keep your promise

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

1 posted 2008-08-27 11:03 PM

This started off such a sad poem but it finished up a joy to read. I hope it continues to turn out well for both of you.

Lindsay

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-08-28 07:20 AM

Welcome, dear ... "tear of blood", your login name, the same as your poem?

Enjoyed your first entry. Promises are beautiful, but can become quite "heavy" with time.

Love and peace of heart.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

martiniat8
Senior Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

3 posted 2008-08-28 08:43 AM

wow passionate, such feeling, I hope the object of your affection knows these thoughts and feelings

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2008-08-28 11:02 AM

Johan,

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" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-08-28 11:23 AM

Welcome to pip!

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