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Dark Star
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0 posted 2008-08-27 03:09 PM





Should I?

Should I given into to temptation
with my love

Fall into their gaze
love them for ever

Should I eat the apple
of lovers lust

Should I?



xoxoxo


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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-08-28 04:56 AM


Seduction is a great part of our life I think!
Follow your heart and you'll know the answer to your question.
Dare to love!

Enjoyed this.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

martiniat8
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2 posted 2008-08-28 08:54 AM


Marg, not sure I agree with you here. Perhaps not seduction, the apple is often used to symbolize knowledge, not neccessarrily carnal pleasure
Margherita
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3 posted 2008-08-28 09:08 AM


There is also seduction of spirit no doubt  and it is equally pleasurable, I would say ...


Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-08-28 11:21 AM


I would  think that the apple represents temptation! Wanting to have it, but the risks that you would be taking. I don't think the apple in this is based on Knowledge

Enjoyed the Write


ARCTIC WIND

Dark Star
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5 posted 2009-03-19 12:45 PM


thank you all

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