Open Poetry #43 |
Dreamscape Time |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Dreamscape Time The world is Dreamscape transience teased by the ice moon’s indifference... (cold light playing the form-shifting shadows) where none may command even the stones to stay, when a million years whirl away with the winnowing whims of wind, water, and time... and nothing stands but the certainty of change, and emptiness of all human plan and promise. --- b. e. adams (8/26/08) [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (08-27-2008 06:40 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Melancholically beautiful, dear Bruce. ... but we are held in love through all the apparent emptiness of our plans ... I believe! Love, Margherita |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"but the certainty of change, and emptiness of all human plan and promise." I often wonder why that has to be. Stunning write, Bruce! Helen |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
teased by the ice moon’s indifference... (cold light playing the form-shifting shadows) A beauty! ARCTIC WIND |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh man, I was about to highlight the better of the lines and ended up appreciating every one of them. It's good to read you, Sir, and a belated happy birthday! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is stunning, Bruce. It is hard to choose but I think this might be my favorite of your poems. Ida |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
Congratulations on this most recent write, Poet. It really is outstanding! |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is outstanding work as always!!!!! Thank you for all you comments on my poetry. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bruce, This is beautiful writing. Alison |
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