Open Poetry #43 |
Whim a Write |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whim a Write I take a chance to note this night that and from everything of which I write is of but dream from long ago is of or about a whim that had slowed; for I’ve been entrusted with several kind notes and those who wrote sent blessings of things, and lovely rings of circling friendship, light totes sincerely true, and yet something needed wings. For I write, even and then most when I dream. I read. It amazes me, the powers that be, of a writers’ stardom, grace, such royalty and those near or far, of high or low bar, those that read and then write, do so, faithfully. Some escape to a painfully sky-filled room with naught to hold but paper and pen; when in silk some take a moment of ill repute, to put thoughts to parched paper and then tell the world not all is light, and then in a fright they fear a void might come upon them; but no, not to this reader, for I delight in knowing when a writer comes forth, and then I admire greatly in a deeper sense of those who might write of a child’s delight for I fear my own childhood muse has taken his or her own great hike, I wonder where I might stand in writing poetry, as I sit with Poe & Twain, under mine own canopy. © 8-21-08 krj " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love ~*~ KRJ |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
Dear sunshine with all meanings of admiration and creativity I salute my pen to this beautiful revealing My respect for you love nourzihane |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awwww!!! I love it! you are blessed and so are we to read you! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Karilea, I happily welcome your two new muses, they have a very blissful air about them and I can see through your words that they are aware of their task to bring you joy, as you bring it to them... and to us! Your sharings are always a special gift, your pen flows beautifully and elegantly, dear friend. Love and hugs ... and caresses to the two lovely new p(o)ets! Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; I am mastered totally by Love." (Rumi) |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh! Oh!! Oh!!! Oh!!!! Ohohohohoh!!!!! Your two new muses, Poe and Twain are beeyoootiful and absolute darlngs! Please give them lots and lots and lots of pats and hugs and kisses from Auntie Di and friendly woofs from Daisy and friendly meeows from Tigger all the way from sunny South Africa. I loved what Margherita called them - p(o)ets. And I really loved your poem too with all its nuances and flavours! I read it again and will be reading it yet again. - Owl [This message has been edited by OwlSA (08-24-2008 01:17 AM).] |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Sunshine, So beautiful - and your muses? They are darling and I think reach out to us all. Poe and Twain. Wonderful. My cat "Big Fat Boodha" wants to be renamed Twain now. Yeah right. xoxoxo Alison |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Love your poem and your muses. Ida |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Whim in deed. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Aha, your new muses Poe & Twain! How absolutely adorable! And this piece of writing is very very special indeed. Hugs to you this late August eve.. as I leave tomorrow for my 'special place' somewhere in time. Love you lady~ |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Karilea your writing is a joy to read and I thank you for it. Keep up the good work. Love Lindsay |
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