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The Wizard |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Adorned in his mystical robes of shimmering moon and stars, drawn from the vault of heaven by the power of Merlin, himself, when other worlds were only seven. He emerges from the crystal cave, from the old world into the new, He holds aloft the sacred chalice. Before him lies the shinning palace... of Chamelot He smiles on his remembering then salutes the once and future king. Ida Werrett |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Absolutely wizardly beautiful and captivating, dear Ida. You are on a terrain that is most enticing for me to walk on ... Brava!! Poetically perfect. Love, margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
Ida, You've captured my passion for wizards in this poem--a magical journey with just enough mystery to keep me coming back, wondering. with smiles Lynda [This message has been edited by Gaelynsgirl (08-21-2008 11:36 AM).] |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Love this, Ida! The myth and mystery of wizards always enthralls. "He smiles on his remembering then salutes the once and future king." Yes - maybe history repeats itself. Helen |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enchanting and powerful!    Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Enjoyed reading you. I liked the way you ended it with the following lines. -------------------------------------------- He smiles on his remembering then salutes the once and future king -------------------------------------------- |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enchanting Indeed!  ARCTIC WIND |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great write Ida, as usual. Love to you dear Lady. Lindsay |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Oh wow...excellent write! Eric |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Ida, You've been into Mary Stewart again. Merlin is one of my favorite people. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you all so much for your very kind comments. Yes, Bobby, I read The Crystal Cave, The Hollow Hills and The Last Enchantment some years ago and found them facinating. Merlin is one of my favorite people as well. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
quite well writ! serious applause!! would there really be a Chamelot!! |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
excellent write, i loved it. i've always liked wizards, magic and all those things, since i was little. you made me remember how much i enjoyed reading those kinds of stories. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 What a magical write! |
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