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Stargazing with you
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Stargazing with you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Center of the Milky Way Galaxy - Nasa picture *** Stargazing with you *** Embedded in the lushness of untamed summer scented grass promising secrecy to our whispers, with only our fingers entwined we called for the performance of the night sky starring Universe. We traveled far into the infinite bedazzled by the flickering light, touching base for a single sigh upon vaguely known constellations and baptizing new ones that fit our own eccentric imaginations. Gazing right through the Milky Way into the staggering cosmic depths, we drifted along divine trails of light like silent sailing vessels at night as swiftly we decoded the messages showered upon us as if in Morse signs. Lost in the magnificence of this view I turned to gaze into the eyes of you where I found your soul's reflection mingled with patterns of twinkling stars. You held me captive there, willingly glued, ready to begin our dance into oblivion. Dawn spread its smile over the meadow, the grass stirred and stretched in rapture to the fading echoes of our one soul song. *** |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
And this beautiful nebulous conflagration feeds my passion... I love your cosmic exploration and will come back. You make me want to pull out my telescope and look towards Sagittarius with fresh eyes... I think we come from the same galaxy! *grin Lynda |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Your words so beautifully convey the milky way , Hope |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, This is a good picture and poem. I know it's out there. Love Bobby |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
wow uh I got uh kinda "turned on" wow |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dawn spread its smile over the meadow, the grass stirred and stretched in rapture to the fading echoes of our one soul song. What a lovely way to finish your lovely poem Top marks for this one dear Margherita. A big hug Lindsay |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you. Thank you. Thank you for taking me along with you. What a lovely journey! Love, Alison |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
Dear margherita I stand across the stations of your writing and i find across every station the sparkling & Beauty. your poem carries lamps of beauty has embllished of letter's gold and power of meanings. I will try to stay here and not be absent from the Squares of your Revealing we have appoiment with your beautiful letter Thank you for this creativity,and for this distinctive prose. love nourzihane |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Margherita - Yes, you take us all on beautiful journeys. What a pity we have to come back again (note I didn't say "home") but thank you, thank you, for your beauty. Love Helen |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
I am feeling like I am watching the sky with you beside me. |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
wow..wonderfull write i loved it, it made me remember when i got my first(and only) telescope. i would spend endless nights looking trying to see further and further into the night.. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Stargazing with you" ~ Now that's a title that was sure to draw me in! ~ and with the author being my divine, cosmic friend Maga Margherita ~ you could bet on it!  "Lost in the magnificence of this view I turned to gaze into the eyes of you where I found your soul's reflection mingled with patterns of twinkling stars. You held me captive there, willingly glued, ready to begin our dance into oblivion." ~ Sighing, here...  Angelo Terrestre, a fellow stargazer. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wonderful and Beautiful! Margherita  ARCTIC WIND |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beyond beautiful Margherita. Love, Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all my dear Poet friends for stargazing with me here and leaving such loving, kind comments. Love, Margherita  "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Stunning words. I just love your imagination and I thank you for sharing your journey. I hope it really looks like this! ooxx Marti Life is a celebration of awakenings, |
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Gumpy Member
since 2007-11-06
Posts 143Canada |
I felt the need of a good read.... and found it in this poem. nice to read you again . Gumpy How is it that after your heart is ripped out, you feel so much? |
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hiddenIntheDark Junior Member
since 2008-08-27
Posts 20 |
Wow, this is so amazing!! I love it!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear Marti, Gumpy (welcome back!) and hiddeninthedark, for reading and commenting so kindly. Love and may you all enjoy a wonderful day and also a resplendent night sky! Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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