Open Poetry #43 |
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gdcod2player Member
since 2008-07-26
Posts 117 |
this one didnt come out quite right it says what i feel but not how i want it too It’s like waking up to a new world Then it’s all gone When nothing has going right You have to stare and think of a new way of life Nothing I do will ever put this to an end I don’t want to find a new person to share Everything I want to know with is leaving me I want to sit and look up at the stars But all I see is everything ending up wrong I would do everything for her But she wont believe a word I say Now I have a reason to tell The side of me you didn’t find out I wanted to tell you everything But you wouldn’t believe me About the things I would do for you I would do everything at your will Even wait at your feet If you couldn’t tell I’m crazy about her And have been for some time |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Sounds like a sad place you are in at the moment.Keep looking at the stars letting the wind touch your face. If there are tears...let the sun kiss your cheeks and tickle your nose. Keep writing it is a great release for many things that go on in life. Hugs BonBon |
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