Open Poetry #43 |
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familiar stranger |
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krizza New Member
since 2008-08-18
Posts 2 |
familiar stranger she saw someone she knew at the corner of the shadowed cafeteria.. ..smoking.. and found a chance to sit beside this stranger.. "had several coffee breaks together afterwards.. in a place where caffeine is not available"// He grabbed a couple of sandwiches and dunked into the misty hot cup of coffee.. **deprived of the true taste of nescafe, she lit a stick of cigarette and forced its nicotine to mix with the frozen hot coffee.. and there was nothing left but silence.. and the harmony of the leaking a.c. an embittered soul and an indifferent stranger.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"Familiar stranger" quite the affirmation ... this comes across as a very melancholic write, but you created the atmosphere with very vivid brushes. May there be some sugar in the next coffee ... Love, Margherita |
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