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Between the lines |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada 
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Can you read Between the lines Between the signs Of words and faces Do you understand the me That exists While I dance through those places Sidestepping phrases And phases That fog the mirrored image Of my own mind? Do you find That things are not always clear Or do you fear The me who’s standing Somewhere here between the words In the white crevices That surround The real me The one who waltzes With words |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I think I can, and after all, being kin, I should! Loved this! So you! - Owl |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lynda, I like this poem a lot. Alison |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Enjoyed your words~~ M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You do waltz well with words, yes! And it is always nice to find something between the lines! Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"Waltzing with words" I like the idea and there is so much more information between the lines just waiting to be discovered. Ida |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
Kin, Ali, Maureen and Margherita, Thank you, each of you for your generous reading. I think each of us is to be found between the lines in the self expression nuanced in our poems. Don't you just love it when you discover hidden layers and possible interpretations among the shadows and the lights. Thanks guys... Lynda |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
The me who’s standing Somewhere here between the words In the white crevices That surround The real me The one who waltzes With words. The one who waltzes with words. What a lovely way to write. Much enjoyed dear Lynda. Lindsay |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
Thank you so much Lindsay, The thought is mutual! with smiles Lynda |
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scorpio eyes shut Junior Member
since 2008-07-24
Posts 31kerala, india |
the eternal hope...for understanding, the eternal doubt...of having that hope realised. keep waltzing!! |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
SES... so true... thanks for the gift of the thought. Lynda |
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