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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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viscosity and laughter drizzling like easy down over tiptoe moments and under there where day begins you wear my mind in gauze protecting my thoughts within til you water them with your commentary sounds and offer additional suggestions that soak me into vulnerability neon which is how your eyes seem to prefer me _______________ daark |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well, I know you ain't talkin' to me, 'cause I don't see you in anything but motor oil. (I happen to find that sexy.)  and definitely not a cheap date, these days!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Can only imagine you imagining me that way. Thanks babe. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love the way you write, more to the point, I love the way you think.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms suesea. I love the way you love. Thanks babe |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
no jagged edges in private rooms, silk edged words soothe like polished glass. Mmmm... a great metaphor for someone as molten and shape-shifting as you. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms indi. If I punished you until your smiled, would that be a shape shfter's grin? Waiting .... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Damn good write me' Friend! Wonderful Write~  ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
A/W thanks amigo for the comments |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
beautiful Mr Daark... just like you! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~just passing thru your scenery, dark one~~ always a stunning view~~~ ~pas |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I do so love the way that you play darkdaddy. Love this'n.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: My eyes see you only through your poetry and what I see is simply awesome... and even more so when the acquired pictures transform into emotions. Ahhhh ... Love, Margherita |
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Kalandria Junior Member
since 2006-05-23
Posts 44Yorkshire, England |
A poem to be read and re-read, I loved it. 'you wear my mind in gauze protecting my thoughts within' Excellent lines. I'm now trotting off to read some of your others. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, thanks babe __________________ ms bel1e, thanks daark daughter, miss you being around ________________ ms gs, thanks donna for the touch __________________ ms mar, you bless me lady friend _________________ friend kal, thank you for the touch and smile |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, you do so glow...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms sun. You smile me with your eyes here. |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
This blossoms like a neon rose invading every crevice of every sense possessed. If I smoked, I think I'd need a cigarette just about now! sigh.... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms G...cigars take longer and kinda look sexy on a lady's lips too..thanks babe |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D, This poem is folded and tucked away as a keeper forever. I think it is already wearing at those folds from me reading it so much. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms ali-san. I wrote it on leather for you so you could never wear it out. Thanks babe. |
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