Open Poetry #43 |
Soul Windows |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I'm seeing you, look at me, my mind has not a thought, stepping miles into your soul, Silent picture speaks to me, burning holes into my center, stareing, you see my core, right through, Walking into my soul with your light, tourching the walls of abandonment, this heart, you now claim as home, These eyes, speak in code, silent, but ever so loud, pounding, at the door of my heart, Spinning, my mind in circles, riding the merry-go-round, tickleing me inside, like a child, When the blinds close, twisted shut, till they see again, you become the love song I compose, Danceing, inside my mind, Two thoughts, poetry & rhyme, together we blend, lifes' harmony, Underneath your microscopes, my deepest truths are revealed, my secrets, I confide, Pictures you take, photos, storeing them inside, your photographic memory, These are the eyes, deep, dark, mysterious, of want and love, They project a magic spell, your heart, no longer your own, See me, see you, see love... Reflecting inside these eyes... |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Ooh! This is another beautiful and terribly romantic piece. Like muchly! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Wow - I just got back from a date with a guy that has very dark brown eyes - he's part Indian and it shows... this just so made me think of him... how cool is that??? |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi ARH, from an artist point of view, eyes play a vital role in everything, off course romance too. Nice write. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
These eyes, speak in code, silent, but ever so loud, pounding, at the door of my heart Absolutely beautiful, dear ARH! Love, Margherita |
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Chosen One II New Member
since 2008-10-23
Posts 7 |
nice rite arh' c.o.II |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
very lovely write...thanks for sharing...enjoyed |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
even better the second time... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
beautiful, and I too believe the eyes are the window to one's soul. That's why I only date guys with blue eyes The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
A Romantic Heart - another winner. I really must learn to do these graphics... BC |
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