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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2008-07-11 12:28 PM






I'm seeing you, look at me,
my mind has not a thought,
stepping miles into your soul,

Silent picture speaks to me,
burning holes into my center,
stareing, you see my core, right
through,

Walking into my soul with your light,
tourching the walls of abandonment,
this heart, you now claim as home,

These eyes, speak in code,
silent, but ever so loud,
pounding, at the door of my
heart,

Spinning, my mind in circles,
riding the merry-go-round,
tickleing me inside, like a child,

When the blinds close,
twisted shut, till they see again,
you become the love song I compose,

Danceing, inside my mind,
Two thoughts, poetry & rhyme,
together we blend, lifes' harmony,

Underneath your microscopes,
my deepest truths are revealed,
my secrets, I confide,

Pictures you take, photos,
storeing them inside,
your photographic memory,

These are the eyes,
deep, dark, mysterious,
of want and love,

They project a magic spell,
your heart, no longer your own,
See me, see you, see love...

Reflecting inside these eyes...

© Copyright 2008 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2008-07-11 08:16 PM


Ooh! This is another beautiful and terribly romantic piece. Like muchly!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

graeshine2006
Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368
The Prairie Lands, USA
2 posted 2008-07-11 09:46 PM


Wow - I just got back from a date with a guy that has very dark brown eyes - he's part Indian and it shows... this just so made me think of him... how cool is that???
Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
3 posted 2008-07-12 03:12 AM


Hi ARH, from an artist point of view, eyes play a vital role in everything, off course romance too. Nice write. Prasad

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2008-07-12 05:03 AM


These eyes, speak in code,
silent, but ever so loud,
pounding, at the door of my
heart


Absolutely beautiful, dear ARH!

Love,
Margherita

Chosen One II
New Member
since 2008-10-23
Posts 7

5 posted 2008-10-26 03:06 PM


nice rite arh'

c.o.II

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

6 posted 2008-10-26 09:00 PM


very lovely write...thanks for sharing...enjoyed
Dark Star
Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392
Lost in your eyes
7 posted 2008-10-27 03:15 PM


even better the second time...
Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA
8 posted 2008-10-27 08:12 PM


beautiful, and I too believe the eyes are the window to one's soul.  That's why I only date guys with blue eyes

The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
9 posted 2008-10-27 10:48 PM


A Romantic Heart - another winner. I really must learn to do these graphics...

BC

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