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Saturated |
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CMP Junior Member
since 2008-07-23
Posts 22England |
Saturated The dark over bearing clouds heavy and thick with their moisture, ready to release Embrace the murky sky, prepared to saturate the ground below The beads begin, slowly, unhurried yet full, dripping gently, steadily Increasing stronger, more resilient, as rain plunges from the sky Thick globule tears descent as the falling liquid strengthens its showers Intense, arduous drops sated with their wetness Pounding surfaces beneath, pummelling all within its reach The earth swallowing the downpour with greed and thirst Flooding nature’s floor, sodden, drenched, saturated |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I want to live where you live! Or at least get some of that rain...for days and days...  loved this |
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ChrisTonner Junior Member
since 2008-08-06
Posts 24 |
I hope I stand in one of these showers one day, with a partner by my side. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nice description of a deluge! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo CMP, These are excellent words. It's well done. Bobby |
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CMP Junior Member
since 2008-07-23
Posts 22England |
Tried something different with this one but seems to have paid off...thanks |
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