Open Poetry #43 |
a certain perfect disarray (rp--re-potted?--for Marge) |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Apple-mint sprigs, tiny leaves unfold to sun in ancient prayer supplication Ever strives to meet perfection daily dedication The lemon tree grew fruit this year. (How perfectly ironic) Blossoms fall--lemon drops-- a heady scent and seductive tonic... A certain perfect disarray; I think I'll let it stay this way. (Some things should be just what they are.) Broad-leaf fern, pineapple sage, rose-in-bud, "Society's Page," (she used to be all the rage) but I just had to have "Blaze Starr." Spears of iris by the pond and just the slightest curve of palm behind the waterfall-- Hawaiian ginger standing tall! My pots of basil (too leggy) are hungry for the planting; bringing out an ache in me-- ever wistful--ever wanting-- a shovel full of upturned earth droplets of rain, quenching thirst. "Gentle hands are needed here," said the breeze into my ear. "Ssshh..." It whispered me aware. * * * I'm re-working these, but tonight's choice is for Marge. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Serenity, This is a Really enjoyed all your views and smells of the write.... laughing here lol p.s. I loved how you added "re-potted", HAH That was a hoot and a half lol Vividly Delicious! ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, this was a wonderful promenade through the richness of summer scents. Love, Margherita |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
makes me wish dearly that I had a green thumb...thank Goodness Jon has two! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
k~ Thank you~ Because I know that you know what I know~ Morning *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Reworking is writing in and of itself, little one... isn't it wonderful!? |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Mmmm! Inhaling deeply the scents of the plants and flowers, and the damp, clean earth, and loving the feeling of my hands in rich soil, and the serenity that it all brings, and thanking the Serenity that brought it all about. - Owl |
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