Open Poetry #43 |
Earth's Last Eden |
Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Earth's Last Eden ~*_*~ * A mystical gate lies just beyond dank, musky plains. It is the entrance to a world full of beauty and light. Upon opening the doors, you're unlocking the secret gift from God. Butterflies flutter around hills of daisies as birds sing God songs, A majestic tree stands strong in endless glow, Apples of knowledge are free for the plucking. All is guarded by golden fences with ivy twining. Mist from a waterfalls is caressing to the face, --Refreshing one's eyes to it's beauty,. God holds you in His loving embrace, --Welcoming you to His land of Earth's Last Eden ~*_*~ * ARCTIC WIND |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
stunning! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Indeed, stunning..a most beautiful scene, thanx for the description. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
SEA- And why thank you! Thanks for dropping by ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Magnus! Thanks so much Glad you enjoyed the write ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ahhh, dear Michael, that is the place to BE! I trust you it exists, next time I see a butterfly I'll ask it kindly to show me the way ... So magical and charming ... and divine! Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Margherita!~ The butterfly will guide you to it's very home... Earths last Eden! I am so happy that you liked the write Margherita!, May you find peace and Happiness there ARCTIC WIND |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
enjoyed this my friend...especially ".......as birds sing God songs,"... terrific wording here. j. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Earths last Eden certainly looks like the place to go to my friend. You wrote it well Michael. Lindsay |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Artic Wind, This is well done. It sounds like a wonderful place. Love Bobby |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Jwesley! Thanks so much ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lindsay! Thanks ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Robert Jordan- Thanks so much! ARCTIC WIND |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Lovely visions and very well expressed. I could see it without the picture and that says much to the expression of view. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Mark! WOW! thanks so much, I am glad you liked it! ARCTIC WIND |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
JamesMichael- Thank you so much! ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now that's my kind of tree! ~ especially when I've had exams to write! I would have eaten a bushel or two of those knowledge apples before heading to school! lol Love your mystical writes, AW! ~ They're magical. ~ and you always post the perfect pic to go with them! Love and hugs, EA |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
EA!! WOW, thank you so very much to you ARCTIC WIND |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
The right place to be when I retire looks so pleasant and clam. Nice write. Prasad |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Prasad! thanks ARCTIC WIND |
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