Open Poetry #43 |
what's it worth??? |
Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
the plans were made the deck stacked in faver of who? who coulda knew? in the end what's true is true to fight is to defend til the death for you and would you let me in? unclean and full of sin? behind your door? I couldn't ask for more you never asked me what it's worth as I was going through an evil rebirth! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Good job of putting this together. a stormy write, with the winds blowing... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
When we love unconditionally we need not ask what it's worth. May the door open and whatever remains heavy on the heart be forgiven ... I found your inquisitive poem interesting. Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
great emotion-filled Write ARCTIC WIND |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I actually wrote this after going through soem pretty tough stuff and surrounded by complete hypocrites...the sarcasm in the line woudl you let me in, unclean and fullof sin, was definitely sarcasm and aimed at hypocrites.... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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