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Open Poetry #43

Life

ChrisTonner
Junior Member

since 2008-08-06

Posts 24

0 posted 2008-08-08 08:50 AM

Life

Its all about the question,
the essence of right or wrong.
Where are we going?
Who can come along?

I feel empowered, stating
my claim.
Not a man who doesnt know
where he is, and where his domain.

Life is a journey not a destination
Its all about the getting there,
than the how you got along.
Keeping up the illusion, striving
to play along.

March '04'

MOCindy
Member

since 2008-07-30

Posts 73

1 posted 2008-08-08 01:40 PM

very right. Enjoyed your poem.
C

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2008-08-08 03:32 PM

The keeping up of an illusion can be soul destroying when one knows it to be such but we are pretty much stuck in it until we choose not to be. Just a thought.

Helen

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2008-08-10 07:03 AM

Life is a journey not a destination
Its all about the getting there,
than the how you got along.
Keeping up the illusion, striving
to play along.

yes, life is definitely a journey Chris.. enjoyed! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

ChrisTonner
Junior Member

since 2008-08-06

Posts 24

4 posted 2008-08-10 08:45 AM

Thanks for the comments, the "illusion" was a few years back now since then I've had a long, hard look at myself and my life, and hopefully now I am what I am, no pretence.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2008-08-10 11:56 AM

"Life is a journey not a destination
Its all about the getting there,
than the how you got along"

yes!

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