Open Poetry #43 |
Amends (an amended rp--humor) |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
My thoughts meander back to Spring. Warmth, sunshine, and birds in sing... Inspiration from sweet song, I smile and turn my pc on. "I must record these thoughts of glory-- the wonderment of Nature's story!" Clicking keys in rhythmic trust- my words unfurling Springtime's lust. Suddenly, without a clue, my screen became deep shade of blue. "Egads! and Drat! Oh no!" I cry. For on my screen was one word: "sigh." A sigh? Methinks it can't be true! Then three more words: "I love you." Surely this must be a joke! Then I jumped back--my pc spoke! "Of course I love you," said pc. "I wish you'd write a poem for ME. We've been together many years. I've wept with you each single tear. Yet every word, you write for him. You think that crash was just my whim? I have a heart like all good folk! The night I crashed? My heart...just...broke." "But," I typed, "this just can't be. You have no heart. You're a machine!" "I can't believe you'd be so cold," cried pc, "you have no soul!" The screen was fading--fading fast. "Please don't go," I typed, "come back!" "Apologize." The screen went black. "I'm sorry! It is me that lacks!" All my words I then recanted. "I'm sorry I took you for granted." "Say you love me..." warned pc. "Then write a poem just for me!" "I love you! And? I will be true!" PC? This poem's just for YOU. I should have seen it all along. Somehow? I turned my pc ON!!!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
"Of course I love you," said pc. "I wish you'd write a poem for ME. We've been together many years. I've wept with you each single tear....." This is my favorite! Now this is funny!-- You're love between you and your computer lol I am sure he would love this poem deeply you wrote for Mr.PC *smiling* ARCTIC WIND |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Your PC has GOT to be a MAC!!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Can't let this one drop yet! : ARCTIC WIND |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Karen, I absolutely love it - and so does Lilian, my laptop! - Owl |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Turning on seems to be your thing In winter, summer, fall, or spring. The words you say to your pc Transmit to everyone, even me! You write your heart, and soul from home I feel yours words in every poem. A sample of that here today, I leave for you while on my way .......... quote: |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I remember this...and I smiled just as large as I did the first time I read this gem! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
k~ I had not read this gem before now I find that I simply adore the all of it ... every word a PC with a ... not at all absurd~ I JUST LOVE IT !! And you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Veni Mortem Junior Member
since 2008-07-31
Posts 43 |
Lol! ^_^ I loved it! And I must say, I think my computer needs a poem, too... If every time it crashes it's heart is broken... Then I have a VERY sad computer. O_O; |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I am actually going to save this one serenity! it's a true funny Gem! ARCTIC WIND |
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ChrisTonner Junior Member
since 2008-08-06
Posts 24 |
I'm no poetic critic, but thats fantastic, very very talented. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I've been digging the archives too, A.W.--picking and choosing what I want to keep, re-working some of the more awkward posts. Marge? If I made you smile, then I'm happy that I reposted this one. (I'd hesitated because I'd reposted it a few times.) But I thank you all, as this one amused me too as it was inspired by my seemingly symbiotic relationship that developed with my computer upon my discovery of this place! Love to all! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
*smiling at this one* Love this, Karen... and love YOU... thanks for the smile... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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