Open Poetry #43 |
A Rewading Smile |
CMP Junior Member
since 2008-07-23
Posts 22England |
A Rewarding Smile I catch your eye as you stand tall, waiting for what? I don’t know You watch all around, soaking in the people passing by I catch your eye, see you glimpse then turn away Distracted by other bodies moving between your eyes and mine You look at your feet, your fingers but then I catch your eye, your quick flicker to check I’m seeing you there A secret recognition, a single glance, questioning yet answering No words spoken yet a novel of meaning in one look I catch your eye and you turn to face me and smile My prize from you, a distant stranger |
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MOCindy Member
since 2008-07-30
Posts 73 |
I like this one too. And love the ending verse. sigh!! C |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Claire, This is interesting and you made me smile. Isn't it wonderful when eyes meet and smiles form? Alison |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
enjoyed this, reminds me of a smile or two... |
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