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Open Poetry #43
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Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14
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Pluto
0 posted 2008-08-05 10:44 AM


Feelings live to only die
Leaving a soul
Wondering why
All of the love
All of the joy
Never enough
Eventually destroy
A dream of want
Hope and need
Futile it haunts
To die it leads

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DreamerSpirit
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 240
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1 posted 2008-08-05 03:14 PM

a lot of truth on those words.

wonderful poem.

thanks for sharing
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2008-08-06 05:23 PM

Very sad, but beautiful.

- Owl
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