Open Poetry #43 |
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For being who you are... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia ![]() |
Because you said You cared Because you smiled On a day That was oh so sad for me Because you listened To my heart breaking And still you stayed To hold my hand To smile my day Thank you It’s you I thank For keeping me safe For knowing who I am For being who you are On a day that sadness reigned Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
I enjoyed this. Great write. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear RDB, There is a nice thought process in this poem. Bobby |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Very touching words, written lovely. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Nice to have someone there, Roniece. Lovely acknowledgement. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Not forgetting what we receive and expressing our gratitude is one of the most beautiful heart motions that I know of. And you always have deeply touching words to express this, dear Roniece! Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, it is nice to see your pen here this way |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Roniece, I share your thoughts about smiles communion....This poem say the essential...Now let the winds take out the dark clouds... have a nice day yann |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
So wonderful to have someone special with you on a sad day. A lovely "thank you". Helen |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Enjoyed. You wrote such a heartfelt piece. Very touching. ~Jill |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
RDB, Just sending my love and thoughts your way. xoxoxo Ali |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
A very sad and beautiful sentiment. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Roniece my good friend, it is a wonderful blessing to have a good friend who is there to help you when they are needed. great post A big hug to you my dear and keep the chin up. Love Lindsay |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My dear RDB, you are truly worthy of someone sharing and caring because that is who you, yourself, are all about! Light attracts Light! ![]() May your sorrows never cloud your tomorrows. With love, Linda ![]() |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hugs and kisses my friend. I love this poem and it needs to pop right back at the top. xoxoxo A |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
There are special angels...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you everyone... I really do appreciate your lovely comments... love RDB thank you Ali-girl... you are so precious to me! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Touching! ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
this is special |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Remembering a friend who stood for you is such a wonderful thought. Nice write. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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