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Ghost on the Beach |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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 I sat alone on an empty beach No one to invade my thoughts Reflecting on the past Wondering WhereWhenWhy You had to leave So young in age Your spirit flew into the eternal Yet, you were here I knew in my heart You had come to comfort me Your job was done And I, unseeing Felt you walk away I looked at my writing on here, and realized that it has been almost two years gone since my last creative post... and figured it was time to change that. The picture was taken on an empty beach in Italy by a friend's girlfriend. She took the photo of the sunset, and the girl- who wasn't there- appeared in the developed shot. Who am I to turn down anything that kickstarts my muse? What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?. www.myspace.com/mindlesspoet |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ringo, I am glad to see you posting poetry. I have read some of the poems that you posted years ago and have enjoyed them. This piece is pretty mesmerizing - and the story of the photo is perfect with the poem. Alone, the picture would have been good. The story made it perfection. Alison |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hey ringo this was amazing! ~~**~~ |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Thanks guys (gals?).. I appreciate the comments. We'll see what my muse has in store for us today. What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?. |
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