Open Poetry #43 |
The Light Shines in the Darkness |
WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
The light shines in the darkness, but the darkness has not understood it. [John 1:5 – The Bible] It is understood or believed that before the beginning there was utter darkness, Chaos the master ruled endless realms of nothingness. Weighted by gnawing emptiness Spirit in thought overthrew the bonds of darkness with light – and what is that called light but life become self-aware? Light is revelation – and the reality of things that had always been but unseen and unknown even unto themselves locked in the dungeon of darkness’ pride – manifested. And what is that called darkness but utter ignorance; the state of unknowing, not being alive even unto oneself, unaware, while and yet always existing in cosmic Pangaea? In the beginning Spirit brought into the worlds the light of life to run its course, long or short, to become swarms of fiery stars burning themselves up in cosmic orgasms, proliferating wildly even unto death. Whispered thoughts among the spheres weigh its inscrutable path cutting down friend and foe alike: inevitable abomination proscribed end of light – and what is death but the unalterable return of primal ignorance? Thus comes the end the laziness of forgetfulness, forged chains of ignorance tighten and lock; the lights wink off one by one: allness once again hidden in primeval darkness. Chaos rules, once more Master un-creator, unchallenged, proud yet ever fear-bound to the next awakening and which state is this now? an ending, or a beginning? |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo WindWalker, This is metaphorically and myth logically very true. Everyone begins and ends in darkness. I suppose it’s kind of restful though. I like the words. Bobby |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
A most interesting ‘write’! I am particularly fond of: “…Spirit in thought overthrew the bonds of darkness with light – and what is that called light but life become self-aware?” AND: "what is … darkness but utter ignorance; the state of unknowing, not being alive even unto oneself, unaware, while and yet always existing…” the following also rather effectively delimits the apparent fate of the “Runaway American Dream” (Democracy gone very sadly awry): “…the laziness of forgetfulness, forged chains of ignorance tighten and lock; the lights wink off one by one: allness once again hidden in primeval darkness… Chaos rules” several essential messages might be gleaned from this 'penning'! serious applause! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I so enjoy and understand your line of thinking, WW. I have quite a collection of your pearls of wisdom and will add this one to it. Ida |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
One Who Walks With the Wind, I honestly could be writing this reply all day long if I were to express all my thoughts on this out-standing piece of poetry! Another WW Love and Light, EA |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Wonderful write ! (((chaos))) fun thought |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I really liked your write Wind! ARCTIC WIND |
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