Open Poetry #43 |
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Sun Dance |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia ![]() |
Well versed in the ways of the people and their cosmology. The time had come to face the enemy, upon the sacred tree. You had your vision atop the hill... Son of Yah... of man... Oh Brahman. Now, at last, one more test to pass to be a fine heyoka shaman. Hokahey Heyoka Heyoka Hokahey You found comfort in the visions that many would find frightening. You had your dream of thunder... Iktomi fell as a bolt of lightning. Hokahey Heyoka Heyoka Hokahey Stripes across your shoulders, back and chest. Hands and feet now painted red. Fourth form called for one more stripe, placed upon your head. You could not wait upon the moon... chokecherries on the twigs. The sage wreath feels quite heavy when the tree is bare of figs. Hokahey Heyoka Heyoka Hokahey To faint before escaping is not the test well ended. Ego negating ego... gazing at the sun suspended. Hokahey Heyoka Heyoka Hokahey *** |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Captivating! Compelling! A vividly realistic and engaging read! It evoked similar past life memories in me. winky wink Great write! XO Linda |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo XOx Uriah xOX, This is an interesting and mysterious read. It's well beyond me. Bobby |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! I have a friend just returned from the Sun Dance and will share this with her. Eric |
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Veni Mortem Junior Member
since 2008-07-31
Posts 43 |
A nice write, quite clever. ^_^ "Hokahey Heyoka Heyoka Hokahey" That's been stuck in my head ever since I read this poem, lol. Quite catchy. ^^ |
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