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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2008-08-02 02:22 AM

Angelica
upon her knees
whispered to the Virgin

please

Pray me not
in sweat and rot:

"I am...I am...?"

What hath God wrought?

oh-so-not-accordingly

Angelica prays eloquent;
and sings the angels' sad repent

fallen

       on

             her

                    knees -

she's spent...

             puddled

                     prone

                          in love...

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (08-02-2008 02:57 AM).]

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2008-08-02 03:16 PM

Oh wow...this is awesome!
Definitely my favorite from you (and I have lots of them!)

Eric

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

2 posted 2008-08-02 07:55 PM

"she's spent...

             puddled

                     prone

                          in love..."

::smiles::   as it should be

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

3 posted 2008-08-02 08:02 PM

P.S. ::smiles::

Veni Mortem is my son. If you find the time to read and reply... I know your comments will be honored. He is a bit of a fan of yours. ::shrugs:: go figure

(((Serenity)))

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2008-08-02 08:29 PM

Sometimes

the fallen

receive the best
of all fruition...

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

5 posted 2008-08-02 11:28 PM

wow! I am like wow...hehe you like my use of big words?

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2008-08-03 04:34 PM

Well, I found the inspiration for this'n some time ago, I just don't often show this side of me.

But I blushingly say thank you..

and awwwwwwwww....Larry? I'm gonna have to check your son. (Be afraid. Be very afraid.)

laughing

Love to all.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2008-08-05 11:17 PM

fallen

       on

             her

                    knees -

she's spent...

             puddled

                     prone

                           in love...

...........................................

Again I find myself reading your great work Serenity!

p.s. This is my favorite part! *hehehe*

ARCTIC WIND

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2008-08-07 10:12 PM

Enticing write, Serenity~

It must be love!!!

MOCindy
Member

since 2008-07-30

Posts 73

9 posted 2008-08-08 12:06 PM

Love the read.(strong feelings is shown in the style)
C

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

10 posted 2008-08-09 11:13 PM

Serenity... you rock! loved this offering from you my friend... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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