Open Poetry #43 |
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prone in love |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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Angelica upon her knees whispered to the Virgin please Pray me not in sweat and rot: "I am...I am...?" What hath God wrought? oh-so-not-accordingly Angelica prays eloquent; and sings the angels' sad repent fallen on her knees - she's spent... puddled prone in love... [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (08-02-2008 02:57 AM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Oh wow...this is awesome! Definitely my favorite from you (and I have lots of them!) Eric |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
"she's spent... puddled prone in love..." ::smiles:: as it should be |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
P.S. ::smiles:: Veni Mortem is my son. If you find the time to read and reply... I know your comments will be honored. He is a bit of a fan of yours. ::shrugs:: go figure (((Serenity))) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes the fallen receive the best of all fruition... ![]() |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
wow! I am like wow...hehe you like my use of big words? ![]() If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well, I found the inspiration for this'n some time ago, I just don't often show this side of me. But I blushingly say thank you.. and awwwwwwwww....Larry? I'm gonna have to check your son. (Be afraid. Be very afraid.) laughing ![]() Love to all. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
fallen on her knees - she's spent... puddled prone in love... ........................................... Again I find myself reading your great work Serenity! p.s. This is my favorite part! *hehehe* ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Enticing write, Serenity~ It must be love!!! |
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MOCindy Member
since 2008-07-30
Posts 73 |
Love the read.(strong feelings is shown in the style) C |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Serenity... you rock! loved this offering from you my friend... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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