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Sunday Matrimonial Read(From the Poetry Workshop)
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Sunday Matrimonial Read(From the Poetry Workshop) |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India 
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My humble thanks to Deer Sir for this thoughtful exercise. The assignment is to use the same words as nouns and verbs in a poem of your making. Do it four times with four different words. Try it. Sunday Matrimonial Read Sunday matrimonial read, “Looking for a guy who can cook, Because I can’t afford to hire a cook, And who is good to look.” Another very interesting read, “I am fair, tall and slim, Looking for a guy, who loves to swim, If interested call me, we can go out for a swim.” Another read from that newspaper, “Hi I am a copywriter by profession, I hate guys, who copy rights, If you are original, please contact me.” The last one, I couldn’t read anymore, “I like collecting costly watches, I like watching bull fights, Contact me if you want to really fight.” So I stopped subscribing, To that crazy newspaper, Never, ever do I wanted to read, That weird Sunday matrimonial read. Prasad.N "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Danny Cobb Member
since 2008-07-09
Posts 74 |
you have set each set in an interesting way. you exercise creativity in each exercise. (SMILES) danny cobb |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Prasad, You are educating yourself with quite the original bug-swatter! Be proud, for he's an educator among originals. And, he's an excellent teacher!  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Another read from that newspaper, “Hi I am a copywriter by profession, I hate guys, who copy rights, If you are original, please contact me.” ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Very cool, and so much fun to read!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bravo! You are stretching your poetic wings with the help of our dear Deer! What a fun read! ~ and very creatively presented! Right on! ~ Write on!  Big hug 'n a smile to you, Prasad the Poet! Linda   |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Thank you Danny, I like all exercises, I like bodybuilding and now I like word building too. Hopefully I will do well with the second one at least. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi Sunshine, yes, I definitely agreed. He’s a real good teacher and I am learning so much from his classes.Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi BluesSerenade, I am glad you found my write fun to read. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi Linda, I am happy you like my attempt. Working on these exercises are so much fun. PTP that sounds so good… (Prasad the Poet). Thank you so much. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Prasad.. I see that you are an excellent student of our dear DEER...  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Prasad, this is really super cute! A fun read that shows your true engagement in improvement and experiencing new ways of writing poetry. Much enjoyed! Love, Margherita |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi RDB, I’ve just joined his classes and they are really tough I can see that. Prasad |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Dear Margherita, I am so glad you like my attempt from the workshop. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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