Open Poetry #43 |
Jammin' |
Sunshine
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Jammin’ Some things predict particular stuff and of stuff and such I’m not quittin’ so here I will sit, a-jammin’ though our music wasn’t writtin’ unless and then if you could hear the burble of such a sweet song that this stuff and such is a-smellin’ a peculiar, sweet belong for it came to me, this own sweet word of “jammin’”, with all its’ memories and how sweet and good the rhythm made of its own vocabulary for we stood and peeled, singing songs washed all those jars, then sweated them so that preserves, we’d see winter long and hear our summer, in some long song from throw-a-ways day old from market our grocer knew to bring and park it in our yard; for we would make it good and preserve and bake it up for food then share among our neighbors over the breaking of a loaf, and clover for bless’d be the honeybee in days of bleak, we made things be. ~*~ And that is called, helping one another Before the days of our so-called big brother. My thanks to Peggy, Betty and their father; And for the neighbors that we knew In 1960 through… (c) KRJ 7-31-08 " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love ~*~ KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-01-2008 09:19 AM).] |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Sunshine, This is very nice. It reminds me of my wife’s Grandfather, who was a doctor in South Philly. During the depression, he fed his whole neighborhood. My mother-in-law used to stand at the door and pass out sandwiches. This must mean I wouldn’t have to hit your garbage cans to get a bite to eat. That’s great work you guys did. Love Bobby |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
WHOOOHOOOO MommaK is a jammin and doing such a fine job of it too. Loved this lady... too!! |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
dont quit you are atalent to reckon. clever talks delay friendship! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I remember all kinds of "jammin'...and this kind too... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
fun to remember isnt it? loved this and the feel of it too! ~~**~~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Robert, we had ways of continuing to take care of our neighbors that probably stemmed from the memories of our folks who had grown up or were born in the '20's and '30's. As I'm sure you may remember. We never expected anything back, and the less we expected, it seemed, the more we received. It was a blessing to hear from the grocer's daughter just today, to say that she would be sharing the poem with her father and family, as they could smile over the memory of a true neighborhood - even in California. Donna, jammin' was a peculiarly wonderful time - because we were also baking, too! Thank God we were in California and within shore winds, because we didn't have AC, and the stove always seemed to be "on!" Poddar, thank you, Sir. I won't disagree with you, but I'll take your blessing with a chunk of salt, because I truly know my limitations. Toe...do you know that just knowing you read this will make me smile all the way through August! Greeneyes, you're too young to remember. Aren't you? Thank you, sweetie! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great write Sunshine Much enjoyed. Love Lindsay |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You stir up the sweetest memories, Karilea~ Loved this homemade poem of yours, it's very special!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi Sunshine, You and your neighbors must be good people. And good memories are worth sharing. Nice write. Prasad "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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