Open Poetry #43 |
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Silk Water |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Silk Water Every color streams of you Flows about me, through and through Emanate to rivers surge In compliment of sentiment Sensuality as sovereignty converge Heart and soul immerse in coriander bath Subtle shades that aver such significance must have Each emotion given due, intricate each changing hue To softly resonate, proliferate Sweet echoes gently agitate Glide along my flesh elations Rise auroral invitations Language made of sweet vibrations Silk water Copyright Kkh 7/29/08 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (07-30-2008 01:31 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ 'Each emotion given due, intricate each changing hue To softly resonate' And your thoughts roll like silk, dear poetess~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I agree with Marge!-- they do ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
very very full of emotion and craft |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautiful - and your words, rhymes, rhythms, images, concepts and thoughts flow like water and silk and silk water! - Owl |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
Silk slides over your skin with supple sensations and this poem achieves this, culminating with the delicious line, 'Language made of sweet vibrations' sigh.... wonderful... Lynda |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You truly give a lesson in beauty, creativity and truth with every poem. Eric |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::smiles:: You had me at "silk water" The rest was a delightful frosting. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Not too shabby kiddo...much enjoyed the view that you gave me. |
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