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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2008-07-29 10:30 PM

Silk Water

Every color streams of you
Flows about me, through and through
Emanate to rivers surge
In compliment of sentiment

Sensuality as sovereignty converge
Heart and soul immerse in coriander bath
Subtle shades that aver such significance must have
Each emotion given due, intricate each changing hue

To softly resonate, proliferate
Sweet echoes gently agitate
Glide along my flesh elations
Rise auroral invitations
Language made of sweet vibrations
Silk water

Copyright Kkh 7/29/08

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (07-30-2008 01:31 AM).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2008-07-29 10:49 PM

Kathleen~

'Each emotion given due, intricate each changing hue
To softly resonate'

And your thoughts roll like silk, dear poetess~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2008-07-29 11:38 PM

I agree with Marge!-- they do

ARCTIC WIND

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

3 posted 2008-08-01 08:03 AM

very very full of emotion and craft

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2008-08-01 01:39 PM

Beautiful - and your words, rhymes, rhythms, images, concepts and thoughts flow like water and silk and silk water!

- Owl

Gaelynsgirl
Member

since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

5 posted 2008-08-01 02:59 PM

Silk slides over your skin with supple sensations and this poem achieves this, culminating with the delicious line,
'Language made of sweet vibrations'
sigh....

wonderful...

Lynda

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

6 posted 2008-08-01 03:02 PM

You truly give a lesson in beauty, creativity and truth with every poem.

Eric

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

7 posted 2008-08-01 05:14 PM

::smiles:: You had me at "silk water" The rest was a delightful frosting.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2008-08-02 11:32 AM

Not too shabby kiddo...much enjoyed the view
that you gave me.

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