Open Poetry #43 |
Speculum Mundi |
XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
I have projected myself to the extent in which I can barely abide the harsh judgment and condemnation placed upon you for carrying the burden of my own darkness and even as I scoff at your bowed and awkward gait that threatens to trample me into the mire of self-loathing, I cannot help but wonder... What were you like... before me ? *** |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wow! Pretty powerful (and honest). Uriah. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Brilliant!! Love, Margherita |
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Veni Mortem Junior Member
since 2008-07-31
Posts 43 |
Brilliant and powerful, indeed. ^^ I like the words you used in this as well, that's my kind of vocabulary! ^^ |
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