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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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Virginia

0 posted 2008-07-28 06:48 PM



Gonna buy me a steak
when da first uh da munt
come 'round

I'll have gas in mah tank
and mah good close on
Don't come knockin'
'cuz I'll be gone
Gonna buy me a steak
when da first uh da munt
come 'round

Gonna buy me a pack
uh tailah- made cigarettes

No more rollin' up butts
in brown papah bags
Gonna sit back 'n
take me a big ol' drag
Gonna buy me a pack
uh tailah- made cigarettes

Gonna rob ol' Peter 'n
I hope Paul dont show up

If I can rob ol' Peter
'n avoid ol' Paul,
me 'n sweet Mary
gonna have a ball
Gonna rob ol' Peter
'n I hope Paul dont show up

I'll be singin' dis song
when da middle uh da munt
come 'round

Be singin' 'bout da
steak I'm gonna eat
while spreadin' my
crackahs wit potted meat

Gonna sing dis song
when damiddle uh da munt
come 'round

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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2008-07-28 07:12 PM


Steak on Friday, then?

(It's Sabbat too!)

hmmm...with spinach and portabello mushroom?

I'm "in"!  

Seriously, though, colloquiallisms are tricky...and dis one resounds to my N'awlins ears as from da Irish Channel...

(prolly not yer intent, though )

Reminded me of the days when the end of the month was known as "Bean week."

I know dese blues too...

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2008-07-29 12:02 PM


I enjoyed this,made me laugh, Uriah. I never saw a real steak until I was grown, just round steak
chopped up to make it stretch for the whole family. Every week was "bean week"
                                       Ida

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia
3 posted 2008-07-29 02:20 PM


Thank you both for your reply.   It was just something that I had to get out of me.  lol
(((Serenity)))  naw, it aint as thick as..."wen dey wud no crawfish, we din eat no crawfish"   but I did kinda ride it lack I tawk.   ::smiles::

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