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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2008-07-28 03:49 PM



"This ol' town aint been the same
since the day the locusts came."

Take a walk
down Main Street...
I'll tell you what you'll find...

empty display windows,
Out of Business signs.

"We heard the buzz",
the old man said

"It was just too overpowering !"

"We were fools
to think we had a chance
of escaping the devouring."

"There's been tales, before and since,
of many towns in other places...
brought down by the locusts...

with their smiling yellow faces.

***

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-07-28 04:22 PM


Yo XOx Uriah xOX,

This works for me.  For some reason, I really like the poem.

Bobby

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2008-07-28 04:49 PM


My son confessed to me recently that he has a fear of locusts.

I told him he was just afraid of anything that could eat more than he could.

Loved this one--I'm a sucker for a last line punch, and you "got" me!

<--smiling yellow face? *chuckle*

<--much better!

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2008-07-28 05:12 PM


The yellow danger - die gelbe Gefahr, I remember the faces of people speaking of this many years ago. They frightened me ...
Now this is a widely observed effect of globalisation.
So many things are out of balance. Many changes represent great challenges, just like the aggressive species of locusts .
You describe this very effectfully!
In the end it all comes down to a better distribution of the worldwide resources ... and human resources too.
Love,
Margherita  


Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2008-07-28 06:28 PM


If I recall correctly, locusts have been a problem since biblical times. For some reason I really like this poem. It seems so real I can almost hear the buzzing.
                              Ida

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