Open Poetry #43 |
I have puréed / the world |
shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
I have puréed the world nectar no longer speaks of the violence of butterflies bullet tips have lost their gentle curves the crayons that are no more are all the same colour everything is perfect now except me -- the pebble in the blender poetry podcasts, blogs and photopoems at URL= http://anthonyarmstrong.ca |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So clever, and so real. Dang! Here I thought my blender had a defective part. Not to be put off, I'll have whatever you're having just the same. Your title was the real kicker, and I especially loved the bite to this! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I like the way your mind works, Anthony. You are a true original. Ida |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this builds up and then Ouch...! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What a thought this is: "nectar no longer speaks of the violence of butterflies" I never actually looked at it from that point of view before, and that's what poets and poetry should do, methinks. This is awesome. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
Excellent - really enjoyed this. |
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