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Open Poetry #43

Maya 2

ramisf
Member

since 2007-05-17

Posts 93

0 posted 2008-07-27 01:09 PM

A second poem to a Lady called MAYA

Maya sees the angels spread their wings
And speaks to them of life before they died
Youth of them are sad, though sadness sings
As beautifully of where they now abide

Notorious Poet

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2008-07-27 03:08 PM

Simply beautiful and felt in my heart.

Again, welcome to PiP.

I hope to read more of Maya. She sounds so lovely.

Alison

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2008-07-27 08:32 PM

Gorgeous, uplifting verse.

A warm welcome to the blue pages, ramisf~

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-07-27 08:40 PM

Yo Notorious One,

I like your style, keep up the good work.

Bobby

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-07-28 05:40 PM

Comforting in its beauty. I love this kind of connection beyond time and space.

Love,
Margherita

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