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Minds change |
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apes531 Junior Member
since 2008-07-23
Posts 35 |
How am I feeling today you ask.. Well trying to explain is such a hard task. It’s been 2 weeks, and still no letter, How come..? This choice cant get any better. I’m starting not to care, I’ve realized lifes not fair. The past few days, Are such a haze. Take a look at me, whats inside? Everything I’ve every tried to hide. I wear this fake ass smile, Cuz I’m leaving in denial. You say everythings gonna be alright, But theres no light in sight. To take a lifes that’s just not me, Damn I wish you were here to see. I can’t do this on my own I need your answer, either by letter of phone. When this poem started I wanted to keep it.. But now my minds changed s**t.. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Another segment of this traumatic story. Terribly intelligent writing. You hit the highlights spot on with every stanza and it makes the reader feel this. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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gdcod2player Member
since 2008-07-26
Posts 117 |
Amazing i want to write decent is why i joined reading yours hopefully will help me but that is amazing |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
powerful write!! i really like flow you got going here...you can feel the emotion coming right off the page...not an easy task. i look forward to reading more of your work! take care, aims The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Powerful write indeed!  ARCTIC WIND |
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