Open Poetry #43 |
Five Senses of You |
CMP Junior Member
since 2008-07-23
Posts 22England |
Five Senses of You I only want to stop and stare, to see your face, to know you’re there To know you’re real, firm to the touch, to see the man whom I’ve longed so much To see your eyes, thoughtful and deep, those eyes that I see each time I sleep To see your smile, that knowing grin, that melts my heart from deep within To feel your fingers explore my face, gently caressing, quickening hearts pace To feel your skin warm against mine, sending shivers down my spine To hear you whisper your love so sweet, against my ear, your breath, its heat To hear your voice call out my name, roll off your tongue, to your call I came To taste your kiss, passionate and full, holding me close as deeper you pull To taste your taste, that’s yours, unique, a taste divine as senses peak To smell your body around me, near, giving me comfort, never to fear To smell your love, pungent with desire, igniting a flame, enticing a fire I want, when I meet you, to excite all my senses, fulfil my passions, my cravings, to have no pretences I want you to complete me, make all dreams come true, all I want is simply......you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a beautiful poem Claire ( but don't ever think someone else can or should complete you M |
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ChrisTonner Junior Member
since 2008-08-06
Posts 24 |
The most beautiful poem ever, to know that I was on your mind, and in your thoughts whilst this was written makes me the happiest man on earth. x |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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