Open Poetry #43 |
Adagio |
Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
You seek and secure all secret ways to pour into my heart Resonant In fleshy valves Spiral To fantastic realms I follow on your endless search though trembled thoughts Absorb my mind Each rise and fall I dare to breath your climbs. You whirl the broken pieces of my soul In perfect pitch they lift and fly In freedom to your goal Where sadness sings in joyous rings and soars on chords and cries and curls. Through Barbers Adagio for Strings Waves of tears of bliss roll over waves of tears of pain Resound In oceans deep of awe. There swells the blood of angels who whispered heavens name Who floats on every score Ascends on every frame. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Another incredible work. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Still incredible second time around. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Ohhh, . . . . listening with my inner ear to the sad, slow, soft music of this! Hugs - Owl |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
Your comments are so interesting. I thought this was a little mournful myself. I showed it to a friend of mine a while ago who likes to tinkle about writing songs and after a bit of re-jigging he turned it into a lovely little song. What was fascinated me was how perky and upbeat his song turned out to be. It never ceases to amaze me how differently people can read (into) the same poem. Thanks all. xxxjanetxxx |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Interesting Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Yup. I was right. Incredible. quote: ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
I can feel the heartbeat of the poet in this wonderful verse. May you bless the composers who bless you and may the cycle be endless. I love this... with smiles Lynda |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I have yet to welcome you properly to the forum, and since I've read this a few times, with such pleasure, I just thought I'd let you know that I'm enjoying your posts tremendously. Your work is captivating. Welcome! |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
As a musician I can appreciate your imagery. It resonated in me a sense of contentment, albeit crescendoing and descrescendoing contentment. Your style and word choice is very appealing. Good job. Jill |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I truly and deeply enjoyed this fine poetic tune. Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
there is something about your poems that I find very appealing for the way they stir the imagination. Ida |
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