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Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

0 posted 2008-07-10 07:28 AM

Are you my mom, I am not sure?
My love for you though is true for sure,
As your blood flows into me through your vein,
I see you in great distress and pain.

Please bear with me for few more months,
My heart beats; I am part of you now,
I breathe oxygen, in me your blood runs,
I often think how?

I will enter this earth very soon,
Of course with some help from you,
For I am one among the very few,
As an alien child, I grow in your womb.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Danny Cobb
Member

since 2008-07-09

Posts 74

1 posted 2008-07-10 08:48 AM

A very interesting approach--an embryonic message and inquiry--as yet alien to the world known by those already born---
An interesting read!

Enjoyed it,
Danny

graeshine2006
Member

since 2008-06-03

Posts 368
The Prairie Lands, USA

2 posted 2008-07-10 10:44 PM

Hi Prasad - haven't heard from you for awhile. Interesting post.. wondering what prompted it. Thinking about things through the mind of a fetus...

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2008-07-11 01:07 AM

I think I understand where you are coming from with this, Prasad.
Ida

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

4 posted 2008-07-11 02:30 AM

Thanks Danny, I am glad you found it interesting. Thanks for you wonderful comments.
Hi Deb, yes I know, I lost my way somewhere and now I am trying to find my way back to the pages of blue. So nice to read your comments, well I read an article about Thomas Beatie. Now, I better stop here.
Hi Ida, it’s so good to be back and I am so glad you understood. I feel so good to hear from you all, thanks so much. Prasad

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2008-07-11 07:45 AM

quote:
For I am one among the very few,
As an alien child, I grow in your womb.

I am glad to see you back, dear Prasad. And this is an intriguing write.
It's "the very few" that stirs my thoughts ...
I love your inspired poem.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2008-07-11 10:32 AM

Thank you Prasad for sharing your poem...There will be a new member on PIP soon...

thanks to you

yann

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

7 posted 2008-07-12 03:38 AM

Thanks Margherita, I am glad myself to come back to the pages of blue. I am happy you liked my poem.

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

8 posted 2008-07-12 03:38 AM

Thanks Yann, so nice to read your comments. Prasad

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