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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I must go away, my friend he solemnly proclaimed as if life would slow or even end were he to stay the same far off lands and horizons new he felt beneath his skin as in the past, he'd often flew to places still where he'd begin the ending of a desp'rate journey the closing of a chapter once writ where hearts again could yearn, he softened his soul so that it could breathe again, to fly once more to live with passion o'er the clouds that covered his simple eyes grown sore with discouragements and doubts weep not for me you could hear him say it's recess time, and I've simply gone to play [This message has been edited by steavenr (12-31-2008 09:55 PM).] |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
This poem is perfect for what has gone on in my life the last couple of days. We lost the first person in our old college group. Thank you for sharing it Steaven...well written and strikes a chord. Hope you and yours had a Merry Merry!...kat |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Steaven, this is absolutely beautiful and also deeply touching. When it's the time, the soul knows and remains calm. Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed this lovely tribute, Tim. Profound and touching. Ida |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
kat, so often when we try to get something to 'fit', I find that (at least in my case) I fail miserably...it is so good to know that this touched you as it did...sorry to hear of your loss...life permits us all to experience its complexities...thanks for commenting Margherita, thank you for not only commenting in such a kind way, but for sharing your wisdom as well...many thanks Ida, not even sure how this got posted here, but I will be more than happy to thank you anyway  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and me? well, I've simply gone to pray  |
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sarah 45 Member
since 2008-12-19
Posts 54 |
That's just amazing and real touching thanks for sharing it, T.C |
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