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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-07-10 06:31 AM


A Woman Like That

Sunday I'd go to church to
pray and have a nice day
with a woman like that.

Monday I'd go to Hanauma Bay
to snorkle, swim and play
with a woman like that.

Tuesday in the morning
I'd take a mountain hike
in the afternoon ride a bike
in the evening kiss all night
with a woman like that.

Wednesday I'd go to Ala Moana Mall
order steak and fish and eat it all
with a woman like that.

Thursday I'd board the Super Ferry
and watch some whales on the way to Maui
with a woman like that.

Friday she'd return to Oahu with me
and we'd soak up some sun in Waikiki
her in her bikini lying next to me-
me and a woman like that.

Saturday we'd eat some shrimp
and corn on the North Shore
make lazy on the beach
and swim some more-
me and a woman like that.

JamesLee
09July
2008



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Danny Cobb
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1 posted 2008-07-10 08:55 AM


Looks like you have your week and date(s?) all lined up!
Sounds like a fun week, Enjoy it "with a women like that!" All the more fun!!!

Danny

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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2 posted 2008-07-10 01:50 PM


James...if she has a sister, even similar...I'd go for a woman like that!!

Neat!

j.

HopeS
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3 posted 2008-07-10 01:58 PM


What a wonderful week that would be


Hope

2islander2
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by the sea
4 posted 2008-07-10 03:11 PM


always delightful James.

thanks

  yann

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-07-10 04:57 PM


Thank you Danny, jwesley, HopeS and 2islander2 for the wonderful responses...
some of these we've done and some we will do in the future when my honey makes it back over...James

Topheth
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6 posted 2008-07-10 08:02 PM


Great read, sir... Love it.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2008-07-10 11:32 PM


James... I wish you lots of Mondays, Tuesdays, Wednesdays, Thursdays, Fridays, Saturdays, Sundays with your honey... just wonderful!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

graeshine2006
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since 2008-06-03
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The Prairie Lands, USA
8 posted 2008-07-10 11:34 PM


I liked this one also... sounds like a week of paradise!
Prasad Nataraj
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Bangalore,India
9 posted 2008-07-11 02:47 AM


Hi James, is it real or just a dream, wow I wish all weeks in a year were like this one. Wonderful write. Prasad
XGarapanX
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10 posted 2008-07-11 06:23 PM


Awesome. And it brings back lots of memories. Haunama Bay, Ala Moana Mall, etc., these were regular haunts for me. Makes me smell manapua's.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

vandana
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11 posted 2008-07-11 06:41 PM


enjoyed
ladylisa
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12 posted 2008-07-15 11:03 AM


Know this feeling well, in a Man like that.  Expressed my thoughts exactly.  Really enjoyed this poem, it hit right in the center of my heart where my love is for my man.  
LindsayP
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13 posted 2008-07-16 12:16 PM



It sounds as if you have found a truly

beautiful women James, All I can say is half your Luck. Great post mate.

Lindsay

sklagurl17
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14 posted 2008-09-30 11:35 AM


This is a sensational write.
I enjoyed reading this.
-Tabitha

vandana
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15 posted 2008-10-03 05:49 PM


nice read
Magnus
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16 posted 2008-10-03 10:04 PM


A downright good plan...but I'll have to
settle with my better half or get the crap
beat out of me,  with a woman like her.

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
17 posted 2008-10-04 04:12 AM


Enjoyed your poem, James, and echo Roniece's reply.

Giggles at Barry's.

- Owl

Margherita
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18 posted 2008-10-04 10:49 AM


Dear James, this brings warmth and smiles on a rather unfriendly October day!

It's very lovely to follow your written dream. Who wouldn't want to imitate you?

Love,
Margherita

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