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A Woman Like That
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A Woman Like That |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A Woman Like That Sunday I'd go to church to pray and have a nice day with a woman like that. Monday I'd go to Hanauma Bay to snorkle, swim and play with a woman like that. Tuesday in the morning I'd take a mountain hike in the afternoon ride a bike in the evening kiss all night with a woman like that. Wednesday I'd go to Ala Moana Mall order steak and fish and eat it all with a woman like that. Thursday I'd board the Super Ferry and watch some whales on the way to Maui with a woman like that. Friday she'd return to Oahu with me and we'd soak up some sun in Waikiki her in her bikini lying next to me- me and a woman like that. Saturday we'd eat some shrimp and corn on the North Shore make lazy on the beach and swim some more- me and a woman like that. JamesLee 09July 2008 |
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Danny Cobb Member
since 2008-07-09
Posts 74 |
Looks like you have your week and date(s?) all lined up! Sounds like a fun week, Enjoy it "with a women like that!" All the more fun!!! Danny |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
James...if she has a sister, even similar...I'd go for a woman like that!! Neat! j. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
What a wonderful week that would be Hope |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
always delightful James. thanks yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Danny, jwesley, HopeS and 2islander2 for the wonderful responses... some of these we've done and some we will do in the future when my honey makes it back over...James |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Great read, sir... Love it. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
James... I wish you lots of Mondays, Tuesdays, Wednesdays, Thursdays, Fridays, Saturdays, Sundays with your honey... just wonderful! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
I liked this one also... sounds like a week of paradise! |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi James, is it real or just a dream, wow I wish all weeks in a year were like this one. Wonderful write. Prasad |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Awesome. And it brings back lots of memories. Haunama Bay, Ala Moana Mall, etc., these were regular haunts for me. Makes me smell manapua's. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
Know this feeling well, in a Man like that. Expressed my thoughts exactly. Really enjoyed this poem, it hit right in the center of my heart where my love is for my man. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
It sounds as if you have found a truly beautiful women James, All I can say is half your Luck. Great post mate. Lindsay |
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sklagurl17 Junior Member
since 2008-09-08
Posts 43nc. |
This is a sensational write. I enjoyed reading this. -Tabitha |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A downright good plan...but I'll have to settle with my better half or get the crap beat out of me, with a woman like her. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Enjoyed your poem, James, and echo Roniece's reply. Giggles at Barry's. - Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear James, this brings warmth and smiles on a rather unfriendly October day! It's very lovely to follow your written dream. Who wouldn't want to imitate you? Love, Margherita |
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