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Your gaze |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * Your gaze * Towards you I walk, my arms outstretched like branches of a tree embarrassed by its wintery nakedness. But your summer gaze lingers on the whole of me, digging deep through all of my defensive layers. You stir me out of slumber and wash a spring tune over me. You say hi to my every cell, without uttering a sound. I respond and move closer dressed in languid buoyancy. Your eyes reflect the colors of all of my seasons at once. I surprise you then as I decide to bloom in the middle of winter, allowing your sun gaze to quickly melt away all the residues of ice that kept my frozen dreams from being realized. * |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, my darlin' Dolphina, there you go again showing us the ofttimes unnoticed world around us, as perceived by your seeing eyes ~ and heart.  Much love to you and your loved ones for the coming new year! May it be joy-filled!  Linda xo |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Many many open hearted lovely lines.....Melts right through the heart. "dressed in languid buoyancy. Your eyes reflect the colors of all of my seasons at once." Now that's a GAZE! Take care Eric |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, This is a good poem, with a most strange and unusual picture. Love Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
This is very metaphorical Margherita, love blossoming like flowers do, a very enjoyable read with exquisite words and beautiful images, will read it more . yann |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
I love your first stanza  Mark |
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sarah 45 Member
since 2008-12-19
Posts 54 |
your writings are so sweat and so warm... liky alot ...T.C |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Beautiful words and picture, Margherita. Flowers like love blossoming in winter can sometimes be out of place but it's the blossoming that's important. Love Helen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - great photo, and poem written for it. Enjoyed this one... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Aww, this is beautiful. A few years ago, I was going on a drive up one of the summits on my brithday which is July 9th. It started to snow and the snow dressed the fireweed and wild rose blossoms. Your poem reminds me of this time. Love, A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all, my dear Poet friends, for the loving replies. I enjoyed them much. Love and joy. Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You have such a beautiful way of expressing yourself, Margharita. Ida |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, the pen you pose with and the parchment you adorn words cannot cover the glory enjoyed this |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Ida, dear D. and dear Nourzihane, for your loving comments. I enjoyed them much. Love, Margherita |
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