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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-12-26 08:44 PM


Bones doesn’t exist
for the affluent world.  

They walk right past,
with their snotty,
pointed noses
held high in the air,
and ignore him completely.  

Bone really must do something
to change that,
he doesn’t like to be ignored.

Bobby

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2008-12-27 09:37 PM


Enjoyed reading this...James
Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-12-27 10:19 PM


Thanks James,

For the kind words on this poem.  I'm pleased someone liked it.

Bobby

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3 posted 2008-12-28 03:52 AM


Bones should read the Dr Seuss story, The Star-Bellied Sneeches.  It's all about a false sense of superiority.

A

Anniepimm
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4 posted 2008-12-28 07:37 AM


Pore Bones! almost makes you feel sorry for him
Good write, i enjoyed it thank you,

Annie

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2008-12-28 09:54 AM


Thanks dear Alison,

That sounds like a good one.  However, I'm afraid that at this stage Bones is not much of a reader.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-12-28 09:56 AM


Thanks dear Annie,

I'm pleased that you enjoyed the read.

Love Bobby

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