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Open Poetry #43

Bones Doesn't Like It

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2008-12-26 08:44 PM

Bones doesn’t exist
for the affluent world.

They walk right past,
with their snotty,
pointed noses
held high in the air,
and ignore him completely.

Bone really must do something
to change that,
he doesn’t like to be ignored.

Bobby

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2008-12-27 09:37 PM

Enjoyed reading this...James

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-12-27 10:19 PM

Thanks James,

For the kind words on this poem. I'm pleased someone liked it.

Bobby

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2008-12-28 03:52 AM

Bones should read the Dr Seuss story, The Star-Bellied Sneeches. It's all about a false sense of superiority.

A

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

4 posted 2008-12-28 07:37 AM

Pore Bones! almost makes you feel sorry for him
Good write, i enjoyed it thank you,

Annie

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2008-12-28 09:54 AM

Thanks dear Alison,

That sounds like a good one. However, I'm afraid that at this stage Bones is not much of a reader.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2008-12-28 09:56 AM

Thanks dear Annie,

I'm pleased that you enjoyed the read.

Love Bobby

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