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Open Poetry #43

road work

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2008-12-25 08:37 PM

All darkness surrounds the last
speck of day, traveling like a mad
man following a path that
will one day end.
This is the time to which
I find myself free of
the thoughts that bind
me to this earth.
I look at the road ahead
finding the turn coming
fast, leaning into it like
I fear falling.
Of all this I cannot
compete with the stars
whom take advantage of
the iridescence.

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

1 posted 2008-12-26 01:41 AM

Cool write!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2008-12-26 08:20 AM

Loved that ending. It nudges one to look at the sky rather than the ground.

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

3 posted 2008-12-26 11:55 AM

I liked it, It has a very nice message
Excellently written...

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

4 posted 2008-12-26 02:45 PM

thank you, its been a while since i was here

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2008-12-30 11:57 PM

Fine writing...James

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