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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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hemingway afternoons, tails out shirts and slow dirt too lazy for dust just laying around on wrinkle wood waiting to be artwork recycleing a footprint perhaps from your funny shoes you used to have those dove sounds around you when you were contimplating adultraside and you hated the feelings of confusion especially with all the studying you did but not reading between the lines much until I wrote you poems on your palms and kissed between your fingers one afternoon out of a million other afternoons that I wanted the rest of the story and I guessed you did too but wouldn't cross against the blinking red hand with a ring on __________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (12-22-2008 12:11 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"until I wrote you poems in your palms and kissed between your fingers one afternoon out of a million other afternoons" you can write poems on me anytime   enjoyed this D |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea..but then we would get into trouble..thanks hon |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Daark, I think every woman who reads your poems would love them to be written to her. You just have this way about you - and your poems reflect this part of you well. Love this one lots. A |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
until I wrote you poems on your palms and kissed between your fingers one afternoon this is might fine writing Mr Daark.. thank you love and  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well, she wouldn't engage in adultaside ( I'd just relax now..Rest the Hemmingway way...... Ya foller.... Now he lives in the islands, fishes the pilin's And drinks his green label each day He's writing his memoirs and losing his hearing But he don't care what most people say. Through eighty-six years of perpetual motion If he likes you he'll smile then he'll say Dark Stranger, some of it's magic, some of it's tragic But I had a good life all the way. Take care Eric |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe...the poems are written about only one woman..and she is all women at one time or another. ______________ ms r&b, thanks babe ________________ Eric..cool tunes amigo...thanks for the snapshot |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"slow dirt too lazy for dust" "contimplating adultraside" ...just loved these word choices...nice write |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Dark Stranger, This is a very cool poem. I like it loads. Bobby |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
tracing her life line his finger followed the curve her story revealed. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
steavenr, humble thanks guy _____________ rj, thanks amigo, much appreicated !! ________________ ms indi. growing older together they smiled as the content of their maturity melded dawn and evenings into jello shaped horizons |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
Mmmmmm... there's always room for jello. Indi- |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi...you read my mind (again) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Incredibly well expressed... Always a treat to read you and to absorb you, dear D.! Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ma mar, thanks babe |
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