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2islander2
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0 posted 2008-12-22 06:25 AM



Happy snowflakes
you get me crazy,
the Earth itself
is a snowflake
as the small one
on my shoulder,
Happy snowflakes
will I become a snowman ?
Sun would melt me,
Happy snowflakes
you get me dizzy.

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-12-22 06:35 AM


Snowflakes may make you dizzy Yann... but you simply make me smile   

Merry Christmas, my lovely friend xxx love RDB xxx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-12-22 01:36 PM


Yann,

There is no such thing as a happy snowflake.

Bobby

2islander2
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3 posted 2008-12-22 04:25 PM


Dear Roniece, happy like a snowflake to hear about you. Thanks for the kind comment.

yann

2islander2
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4 posted 2008-12-22 04:26 PM


Thank you Bobby for the kind comment.

have a nice day

yann

vandana
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5 posted 2008-12-22 05:57 PM


enjoyed
LindsayP
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6 posted 2008-12-22 11:02 PM



Cute post Yann, enjoyed.

Lindsay

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2008-12-22 11:05 PM


2islander2 - never thought about snowflakes this way, now that I've thought about it they make me crazy and dizzy also. Do you think they have been in the wine barrel...

BC

secondhanddreampoet
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8 posted 2008-12-26 10:57 AM


a most pleasant Wintry 'write'!

Those snowflakes have a magnificent "Fractal" ['fractional dimensional'] geometry and artistry to them as well.

applause!!

2islander2
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9 posted 2008-12-26 01:29 PM


Thank you Vandana

yann

2islander2
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10 posted 2008-12-26 01:30 PM


thanks Lindsay

merry Christmas

2islander2
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11 posted 2008-12-26 01:31 PM


Thank you Bill for the december dose of humour, the season needs that.

yann

2islander2
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12 posted 2008-12-26 01:33 PM


Thank you Bruce, fractal is a good idea, this mathematical model is everywhere in nature and manificent. May be our feelings are fractal too

merry christmas

yann

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13 posted 2008-12-26 07:10 PM


Nice...James
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