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steavenr
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0 posted 2008-12-20 08:14 PM


My weekends are busy.  I need to know where the funerals and the weddings are in town.  I am a pastor.  This week I read about Julia.  She was a real person and was 96 when she passed away.  I did not know her, but felt compelled to write this when I read her obit.  I write a poem for all families in funerals I preside over, but rarely for someone I do not know.  For what it is worth...

                  Julia Carr

The years have flown, or so they seem
Like quickened sands through life's hourglass
Though years dissolve like morning's steam
And times both good and bad have come to pass

At ninety-six the decades roll
Like lilies on life's meadow-field
A life so full, a deep-rich goal
Enlight'ning others with selfless soul

Sharing all the joys of life
A loving mother, a grand one too
A loyal and a caring wife
Pointing children in what to do

She leaves a legacy of Christ's rich love
Of hope and glory, of faith and peace
And goes to her home that's built above
By her ever-faithful Prince of Peace



© Copyright 2008 Steaven R Snow - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2008-12-20 11:03 PM


Hey...I'm here.

Not one life should pass without at least one mourner.



you're lovely to do this

YoungatHeart2
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2 posted 2008-12-21 01:11 AM


What a compassionate gesture. Her family surely appreciated these kind words.
YaH

Marc-Andre
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3 posted 2008-12-21 02:48 AM


Beautiful. Mark
2islander2
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4 posted 2008-12-21 05:16 AM


just beautiful.

thanks for the poem

yann

gilead
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5 posted 2008-12-22 01:22 PM


This is wonderful Pastor. I think of the great Czeslaw Milosz who had a personal mission in his poetry to memorialize those in song by carving their names in everlasting stone, who might otherwise not be remembered.

Best wishes, and a merry Christmas!

art

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-12-22 01:33 PM


Yo Steavenr,

This is a nice memorial.

Bobby

threadbear
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7 posted 2008-12-22 02:24 PM


Yes, Steven, so hard to write the heart's commands.  I knew you had a special glow of warmth about you, now I know where it comes from.  You are a special man, Steven, very special,
fondly,
Jeff

vandana
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8 posted 2008-12-22 05:56 PM


enjoyed
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9 posted 2008-12-22 07:15 PM


It takes a special heart-gift to write a eulogy, whether for someone known, or unknown to you personally. Thank you for sharing lady Julia.
LindsayP
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10 posted 2008-12-22 10:35 PM



Take a bow my friend for that is not only a wonderful poetical eulogy it is also a very fine poem, thanks so much for sharing this masterpiece with us all Steav'. Take care.

Lindsay  

Bill Charles
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11 posted 2008-12-22 11:00 PM


steavenr - very gracious for you to do this. I'm sure she would have been very pleased and happy to read it... Best to you, Merry Christmas too...

BC

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