Open Poetry #43 |
Julia Carr |
steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
My weekends are busy. I need to know where the funerals and the weddings are in town. I am a pastor. This week I read about Julia. She was a real person and was 96 when she passed away. I did not know her, but felt compelled to write this when I read her obit. I write a poem for all families in funerals I preside over, but rarely for someone I do not know. For what it is worth... Julia Carr The years have flown, or so they seem Like quickened sands through life's hourglass Though years dissolve like morning's steam And times both good and bad have come to pass At ninety-six the decades roll Like lilies on life's meadow-field A life so full, a deep-rich goal Enlight'ning others with selfless soul Sharing all the joys of life A loving mother, a grand one too A loyal and a caring wife Pointing children in what to do She leaves a legacy of Christ's rich love Of hope and glory, of faith and peace And goes to her home that's built above By her ever-faithful Prince of Peace |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey...I'm here. Not one life should pass without at least one mourner. you're lovely to do this |
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YoungatHeart2 Member
since 2008-12-12
Posts 81 |
What a compassionate gesture. Her family surely appreciated these kind words. YaH |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Beautiful. Mark |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
just beautiful. thanks for the poem yann |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
This is wonderful Pastor. I think of the great Czeslaw Milosz who had a personal mission in his poetry to memorialize those in song by carving their names in everlasting stone, who might otherwise not be remembered. Best wishes, and a merry Christmas! art |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Steavenr, This is a nice memorial. Bobby |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
Yes, Steven, so hard to write the heart's commands. I knew you had a special glow of warmth about you, now I know where it comes from. You are a special man, Steven, very special, fondly, Jeff |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It takes a special heart-gift to write a eulogy, whether for someone known, or unknown to you personally. Thank you for sharing lady Julia. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Take a bow my friend for that is not only a wonderful poetical eulogy it is also a very fine poem, thanks so much for sharing this masterpiece with us all Steav'. Take care. Lindsay |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
steavenr - very gracious for you to do this. I'm sure she would have been very pleased and happy to read it... Best to you, Merry Christmas too... BC |
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