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tfaye
Junior Member
since 2008-12-18
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0 posted 2008-12-18 10:10 PM


Put your lips to mine
I will kiss, suck and tease.
Give me your tongue
I will suck, tease and taste
Place your finger in my mouth
I will tease, taste and maybe beg
Now that you know my mouth,
Anything else you’d like to share?



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Marc-Andre
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since 2008-12-07
Posts 501

1 posted 2008-12-18 10:15 PM


Great first try, I dare not imagine what you will achieve with experience... Welcome to the forum! (You might want to consider paying a visit to the mature content forum though...)Mark
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2008-12-18 10:23 PM


Yo Tfaye,

This is good work.  In answer to your question--well, it all depends.

Bobby

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

3 posted 2008-12-18 10:24 PM


sizzle, (btw, welcome to PiP)...
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