»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #43
»
first try
| Open Poetry #43 |
|
first try |
|
|
tfaye Junior Member
since 2008-12-18
Posts 33 |
Put your lips to mine I will kiss, suck and tease. Give me your tongue I will suck, tease and taste Place your finger in my mouth I will tease, taste and maybe beg Now that you know my mouth, Anything else you’d like to share? |
||
| © Copyright 2008 tfaye - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
 Great first try, I dare not imagine what you will achieve with experience... Welcome to the forum! (You might want to consider paying a visit to the mature content forum though...)Mark |
||
|
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Tfaye, This is good work. In answer to your question--well, it all depends. Bobby |
||
|
steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
sizzle, (btw, welcome to PiP)... |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
